I just read this sentence, about a shapeshifter: "His skin brightened into a dark, luminous brown." Mind you, there was no description of what his skin looked like before, so there is no way for the "brightened" to make sense. I just don't believe a human would have made that word choice. There were so many em dashes and run-on sentences too, and I'm only on chapter 4.
by shapedbydreams
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What’s the book?
Well tell us the book name so we can look it up too.
yeah it doesn’t really make sense
You might be underestimating how badly humans can write
Is it enjoyable? Will you finish it?
I messed around for the first time yesterday writing a story with ChatGPT. And it’s fun to use, especially as a sounding board. But the scenes it wrote were so boring in basic. Even with me bringing my (hopefully) unique ideas, it somehow generalized them in a way to make an acceptable but bland story.
Reminds me of the Ghostbusters joke: ‘You’re right. No human being would stack books like that.’
I don’t think that’s anywhere near enough evidence. It may well be that it’s a poor bit of writing.