Chapter 1 of The Council of Salt – Political Fantasy / Plague & Intrigue

Hi everyone! I’m sharing the first chapter of my political fantasy story, The Council of Salt. It’s a high-stakes tale of plague, political tension, and desperate choices. I’d love feedback on pacing, tension, and character voice.

Blurb: Nairaat Heartsbane is dragged through the fury of a bloodied, rain-soaked crowd, accused of bringing death to the Nomads. Matriarch Essara Nheir watches from above, helpless but resolute, as the plague spreads, the bodies pile, and the Dominion’s authority presses forward. Every second counts as they race to prevent further catastrophe

Here is the link below for anyone who is interested.